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 				<strong>Confidentiality</strong> is the goal that only the person, people, organization(s), or other entities you addressed the message to can read the message.
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-				<strong>Confidentiality</strong> about how to hide information so that only the person, etc you want to read, listen to, or watch, etc a message can do so.
+				<strong>Confidentiality</strong> is about how to hide information so that only the whomever or whatever you want to read, listen to, or watch, etc a message can do so.
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 				(In <strong>cryptography</strong>, things such as text, audio, and video all get called a "<strong>message</strong>".)